I've been very busy lately. I started working on the Freeze Ray again (resulting in the destruction of my webcam) - but at least I have plenty of Wonderflonium!I ran into Captain Hammer again recently At least this time, he didn't throw a car at my head. Once I get all the problems worked out with the Freeze Ray, he'll see. They'll all see, and by then, I'll be in the Evil League of Evil. Even Penny will see that I'm not a loser (like cheesy-on-the-outside).
Speaking of Penny, I need to stop by the laundromat. Yes, even super villains need to do their laundry. Maybe I can stop by the Frozen Yogurt place too.
Oh, back to business.
I can't answer as many fan letters as I usually do, but let's see here. I have one from Johnny Snow. Again, he is accusing me of not wanting to fight him.
Okay, listen, Johnny Snow. You're not my nemesis. Everyone knows that my nemesis is Captain Hammer. I'm ready to move on from this, and you should just accept it. Once I join ELE, maybe I'll turn my attention to you.
Sigh. Some people.
In the meantime, keep an eye out for my acceptance to ELE and peace everyone. Only not really..
"Wonderflonium"? That's funny! lol! Well, my guess is that you've chosen SpongeBob Square pants as your persona. The choice of words you used was very effective in helping me determine who it was/is that you're impersonating (if I’m correct). It sounded very “cartoonish” with the ‘throwing the car at my head’ and ‘super villains’ go to the Laundromat expressions. And I believe Penny sounds familiar.So, I would say that the tone and the word choice work. What doesn't work is the lack of location. I think you should have put more information or more hints about location and/ or surroundings to bring about better ideas and imagery for the reader.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked the post. The spacing in paragraphs and the almost candid sentence structure really made it seem real :) I liked it!
I do have to agree there was a little bit of a lack of location, however I am not completely familiar with the series to properly judge the entry but it seemed right from what I know of it.
CAPTAIN HAMMER!!! haha. i about died when i read this post! thankyou thankyou, Dr. Horrible for blogging an actual real life post (for your Sing-Along-Blog) -you made my day. haha. good job!
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